Thursday, October 02, 2008

feeling the breeze of life go by

the crevices in the skin on my knuckles
and the lines around my eyes
don't lie.

they're weathered
by the stormy times
and well, just time and life.

chapped by wind
chapped by pain
chapped by days gone by.

but wait, my soul--
do not despair!
my soul, you're not alone.

a desert wind blows without,
but a balmy breeze within--
the very breath of God
making all things new,
including you, my soul
each day.

Inspired by this poem, written by the brilliantly talented Thoti of El Poeta de las Colinas Solitarias.


Tricia said...


DeuceMom said...

This is a really fantastic poem! Thanks for stopping by my blog. I'll add you to my reading list - I'm so interested to see how your spain trip works out!

Sharon said...

Love the poetry! Poetry posts are always a hit! thanks for sharing.

Saucy said...

Oh, I loved that! Thank you!

thoti said...

.. tú si que eres una poeta, una artistaza y una gran persona.. te mandamos besitos desde tierras mañas, jeje..
.. beeeesoooooooooooos...